Nice one, keep writing~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Brilliant! Your best poem in my opinion, it is full of emotion, and the repetition of you in the 1st three lines strongly puts accross the subject of the poem! Excellent!

cheers 4 all d really nice comments guys maybe going through all dat shit wiv d lad was wrth 2 av such nice fings sed about me!

xxx

I did write it friom experience yes an writin it helped me wrk out some real rubbish wiv dat lad! Im glad u like it! xx

The hurt will finally go away I can relate to this poem! Exellent job! Take Care of ur self and be strong! Brooke

great poem! very creative...

THIS ONE IS REALLY GOOD....