That was cute the last part had some humor to it nice work! Brooke

i love your poems

umm... whats it a theory of? i'm confused! it rhymed well, but it was confusing

its a theory of y i fall in love the way i do!

Yes i loved reading this! keep it up :)

ah i get the theory ....am sure its not cos u were dropped on ur head when u were a kid. lol. ncie sweet lil poem.. take care.

Excellent write. Keep smiling and keep writing!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

gr8 work
short and sweet
5/5
THAN 4 UR COMMENTS

short but a very good poem.. 5/5!! well done Gemma!! hugs from september!

Excellent. That was great, though it was short the message was striking. Very good poem, keep writing!
Satuxxa