wow thats really good thanx for the comment on ur poem and this has happened to me before

Brain vs heart! very nice and original, very well done.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

So true. I love it. excellent writing, it really comes from your heart.
Keep the Faith
Peace Out

Very good poem, I really like the contrast. Also the idea was great and original too. Great poem, keep writing.
Satuxxa