i really like it....oh i can still hear it in my head....
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I really like this one katie. You are a good writer and can put emotions into your poems i espesally like:
"Somewhere over the rainbow
Lies a true life
Where I can break my shell
And live without my knife"
That bit flows really well and i like the sound of being over that rainbow.
*sighs*. oh well another 5/5 from me. Keep it up.
~@L€X~

interesting again! ilike ur poems... that have a lot of meaning... i like that "somewhere of the rainbow" it sort of describes that happy place that really just doesnt exist... really good poem, excellent!
stay strong and take care always