Comments : Just Emptyness

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    I don’t have a mind
    But nothing can seem to be left behind
    I feel like a drop of blood
    That goes around on and on
    A drop of blood that doesn’t leaves
    Even if it doesn’t wants to exist

    that was my favourite part, i really loved it, i added you to my favourites!!!
    keep writin, 5/5

    Luv Always
    *LuCy*

  • 18 years ago

    by Nomad

    Interesting poem full of emotion, *claps*
    good bye

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    good poem 5/5
    thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Titan

    thats an awesome poem! i felt that way 4 the longest time. u have an awesome way of turning a poem into an awesome work of literery artwork.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea

    hey..
    you said this poem meant something to you and i know how that can be
    i think you really have a talent at writing
    this was an awsum poem 5/5 no doubt
    text me back chels xox

  • 18 years ago

    by love06

    heyy i think it was a great poem... can relate to u alot 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    WOW... ummm... thats.... WOW... so yeah im pretty speechless that was an amazing poem, the emotions are so powerful its crazy... very very good... 5/5