this is a very good poem, beautifully written, but no one deserves that dont be so hard on yourself, ur a really good at writting poems keep it up....

please read/vote/comment on my poems whenever u have the time thanx

xXx take care love from Codey xXx

Wow Shell amazing poem, great flow and emotion although I agree with Codey, YOU don't deserve that, we all make mistakes and we can never correct them just learn and forget them.
Be strong!

WHOA! I love this, I can really relate... Stay strong huni, *hug* 5/5
xo