awesome job!! i reallly loved it...really interesting! keep it up and take care~
love ya~
*Brittany*

Very creative format...I liked this alot! It was written beautifully~Holly

amazing, wish i could write in a rhyme scheme like that! this amazing, A grade stuff! good one!

Nice to know you can write these type of poems too, i have knowledge os these writing styles, but i never try writing any such poem.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

intresting, and very good!!

~PLP~Lil Slam~ lots of hugs and love

You said you had a monotetra, so I checked it out and I must say its very good! I loved the wording you used...Wonderful, keep up the good work.
Dorotea