aww heather i really like this, it has a great point.....umm i edited a poem and now its called "these secrets i will keep"" or something like that lol.....i still dont think its completely finished but i did add some stuff to it, let me know how it is if you get time....great poem once again =) ~much love~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

excellent job!! i really loved it! good one!! keep it up~ 5/5 take care
love ya~
*Brittany*

Wonderfully insightful! Usually when people talk about praying, it's always about themselves! Lovely poem, keep it up~Holly

hmmm it's sad that life doesn't work that way. it's silly really the way the world functions without that sence of equality, it annoys me. Oh sorry i'm blabbering. Great poem love it!

Excellent write, heather. keep writing and keep smiling~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

great poem, excellent 5/5!! your such a great writer and person, never change! and f.y.i. i don't relate to "World's Perfectionist" it's more of just a reminder to people that you should love people more then you love your work thing. but thanks any way.

~PLP~ Lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Great poem! I loved it. These are the things we should all pray for.
Take care and God bless!

Very good Heather.....5/5

You need to come hang out with me and hunbun....we'll all go to the beach, JustUs girls.... ;)~