by Jason Meres
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Everyones saying this is short and you should make it longer....however, it seems to me that it is only missing one line, the last line, as is, just doesn't seem to wrap it up. Regardless, solid content and well expressed. |
by Hina
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simple, needs a little more elasticity and complexity. Almost there... |
by Frankie
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Isn't this the way love usually goes? |
by Brookeღ
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So true!! |
by AJ
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Hey, I like it. It's good. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by ~*Ley*~
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not bad. you overused the word everything though. |
by EoB
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So Damn TRUE |