This is so sweet reminds me of my b/f

Hey, i can really relate to how you feel when you write. Very nice work, check me out sometime

awww that reminds me of my boyfriend........ thats EXACTLY how i feel.............. so many strong feelings from that poem GREAT outstanding job, keep writing your an awesome poet!!

I loved it! This is so sweet. I especially liked the stanza:I open my mind and you are there
With deep green eyes and twists in your hair

Great job!