NICE, very good! keep it up.. Please check out my poem "A place called heaven" it would mean a lot.. thanks!

sooo good!! loved it soo much..another 5/5..your really good.. i hope that you continue to write:)

"We had it all, we meant to be"
To make it more rhythamatic, use TWAS instead of we...Also, it makes it sounds more professional. Nicejob!
~Hina

this is a sad poem and it is hard to be alone when you have been together for so long 5/5

This is short and sad, but i liked it:D
only think that caught my eye was "We had it all, we meant to be" you should try cxhange it :)

well written poem :D