Very good poem, well done, good work and keep it up, I hope you see how much people care about you

I love the last line,
"I gave up on life when they gave up on me"

great job writing this poem! maybe one of my favorites!

~PLP~ Lil slam~ hugs

Your poem is very good it is one of my favorites. You should take a peek at my poems Always, and The love of my life. and tell me what you think.