very good poem!! 5 stars for this one! keep it up.. please checj out my poem "I wanted everything" it would mean so much to me... thanks a lot

You slit your wrists and slowly
Slip away from the pain inside
Slip away from the heartaches
Away from the emptiness
You feel so alone

speaks the truth... i liked ur poems.... hope u write some more.... ur piece are very interesting... sad but well written... much love

Wow... You're a really amazing poet. Keep doing what you do!

And your ready to crack
As you fall to the floor

Those lines are amazing. I'm pretty sure so many people can relate. Very well written.

Take good care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

a sad but true poem, everyone feels alone some times, n sometimes the only thing i feel is pain no matter what anyone says or does i ant change what has been. take a look at my poemsn comment u neva know u may like em

MaTt

Very good, very emotional, stay strong!
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wow, l can totally relate, really good

thats how i feel day and night...good job....

healing_wounds