oooo, i like it, great imagery and description, 5/5!
Love always, Lmay xXx

whoa hun, fab!! the lines

She opens her mouth to speak,
But the words don't come so fast,
You bend down to hear them,
The words she will speak last,

stood out aswell as many others, and the finish was perfect. always here if ya want or need me :)

lu -x-x-x-

Fantastic poem hun!! Its absolutely brilliant, imagery was flawless..just brilliant!!! Your recent work is all so good, hope to see more!! xxxxxx

Here if you need me xxx