It's quite good, it might be better if it was longer. Just my honest opinion. Charlie x

Not bad for your first poem..... I liked it, keep writing...

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Not bad for a first try! But you could make it better....or for future reference (I'm not saying change it) give examples. Explain how she makes you smile and relaxes you. Tell me why she's your best friend. See where I am going with this? :) And use different words instead of she / he so much. My dearest friend or something. Anyhoo sorry if I bugged you! I am looking forward to reading more. I am going to add you to my favorites so I can see about your next shot at poetry! Welcome to the site! Enjoy!!!

That was good.