i reli loved readin this it was an amazin poem. well done keep writin ur fab xxxx

wooooooooooooooooow rachel!!!! amazing!!!! I LOVE this bit

Pot and wine and razors made reality become real.
They re-opened the scars in her heart, and wouldn't let them heal.

AND the 5th and 6th stanzas had me glued to the screen! wow great work LOVED IT! xxxxxx