you have a lot of talent! Keep it up!

wow it took you like 2 seconds to write that poem. U do have a lot of talent. We can both relate to eachothers poems because even tho both of our dad's our worthless (my dad used to beat my mom in front of me) we still somehow find a way to love them. And want so bad for them to love us back. Thanks for commenting on mine. Lots of Love ~*~ Chantley ~*~

great poem! really sad but really loving! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

i'm totally feeling you on this poem only difference is your father smoked big blunts my father smoked little rocks....

That is the hardest thing to do....To say as bad as you've hurt me I still love you....I've had to say it to my Father....For just slightly different reasons though....Nice write!! 5/5 :)