Excellent write, very well done.
5/5, Take care, Always believe in love, Amit

Wher would we be without dreams.
Excellent poem the flow is wonderful. I couldn't stop reading it untill I had read it through twice, unlike some other peoples poems I've read it really grabs the attention. 5/5
~anne~

Really good. However, I feel like the meter was messed up a tiny bit with some of the lines. Good job anyway.

~Ciao Lymtab Lippy

that was cool, really sweet, too...i liked it, it's one of those poems that paints a picture in your mind of what's going on...good job.

This poem is so wonderful. It's flows so sweetly and you see everything happening in yoru mind. You feel as if you watn to be in this persons place. It's very romantic. 5/5!!

OMG THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
i absolutly love it :')
-lizzie-

I really liked this. I think that it means a lot more when guys write this kind of stuff, cause it shows that you all do have a sensitive side! :)

Hey that was really good keep it up