Hmmm...this one was interesting....good read though! I liked it a lot!

Wonderful poem but it leaves u guessing at the end. Very mysterious though. good job 5/5

This is a wonderful poem! I loved the pictures it invoked. Beautifully written. Maybe sometime you could stop by and check out some of my stuff and comment\rate? Thanks, tata now.

Eden

Very good poem, well written and very dark.