by Courtney Lynn Apr 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
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Bodies mold together in an intricate dance |
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I think you should also make this one longer, you have so much talent that you can make it longer and it'll still be amazing.... |
by Richard
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good y was it short meh good anyways |
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I love you Bethy!!! |
by Amanda
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I think you wrote it well. Keep it up and thanks for your comments :) |
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short but good! |