Hey this was really good but a bit sad. It was beautifully written! :)

short and expressing yourself.. very sad but very good...
5/5

short but very emotional

wow this one was way shortet than the others.....Id maybe make it a quote....How do you feel about them lining for her????

They really don't my sister is 12... She is really pretty tho... and she looks older than she is... But I am sure someday they will be lining up for her... and I wish her luck!!

haha i smiled when i read it

I liked it but i think it should either be a quote or it should be made longer4*

Why when and how are the questions you need to be asking this seemed more of a rip off then a poem if your gonna write write with purpose or don't write at all. I just feel you could have done alot better