Excellent write, Line. The flow is really nice, and so is the whole poem. Keep writing like this.
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

this one was pretty good.

Great poem but in some places it didn't flow very nicely but i liked it all the same...

I LIKE THE FLOW TO IT AND THE EMOTION IT IS A GREAT POEM PEACE.....

I LIKE THE FLOW TO IT AND THE EMOTION IT IS A GREAT POEM PEACE.....

I LIKE THE FLOW TO IT AND THE EMOTION IT IS A GREAT POEM PEACE.....

very good! awsome work.. 5 stars for this one.. keep it up..
kramar från mig =D

Thats a very beautiful poem! You write from your heart and you have a very good talent! Keep up the good work!Thats totally 5 stars. Maybe you could comment some of my other poems. That is if you want. Thanx

I liked it, flow was a bit strange in places, but I set it to a bit of a tune and just sung it and it worked out splendidly, well done.

Damn, you're good :)