Comments : My solemn oath

  • 19 years ago

    by elizabeth

    gosh laura, i love it

    ""This is my solemn oath!" i say
    "by this i will not cry!""

    I think this is my favorite part..
    -wow..I'm pretty much speachless it's so good

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Cool and dark. Since you asked me to check out your poems I decided to and this is great.

  • 19 years ago

    by Chris

    wow....that's really good laura.