Great poem! I loved the intensity! From the very first line I was intrigued! Keep it up~Holly

Wow. This was mind-blowing! You have such a talent!!! Nothing in this poem seemed forced, fake, etc. It was all EXCELLENT!

Thank you so much for the comments and vote. They really do mean a lot. I added you to my favorites, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems soon!

♥ Grace

Rose, its funny how poems and songs evolve over time, I would be interested in reading the original piece.
This however was excellent I read write and play guitar also. I’m adding you to my favorites, looking forward to reading more.
5/5
Dave.....