hey everyone

here is the poem i have been working on. it isn't good whatsoever. if you could tell how to fix or suggestions on what to u would do that would be great. i take critism openly!

waterlover4890

5 all the way.so real and true. i swim 11 months out the year. cold,hot, or warm!!
supurb

nice love it write more

this is really good. i totally understand that you had trouble making it into a poem.

Wow...great! You feel like you are there when you read this....it's really good! 5/5

Good write, I love swimming! thc for r/c on my poem