that is so amazing good job!! that was so great that's one of my favorite poems.
gret job
Takecare*~
-Kit

This was a great poem. I loved it. well done...
-Take Care-
:*( Always, Danielle.

Nice poem... a few parts sounded a bit forced and i think the rhythm could have been better but overall it was a very beautiful, well thought out, well written poem.
much love,
-A

Beautiful write m'love. Very powerful and emotional...tears are in my eyes...as most people said, it reminds me of me, with the exception of the diary part...=). Great job baby..I love you so much, I hope you post again soon, I love your writing so much, you're so talented! <3 i love you xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

so sad...=( but i can relate...brilliant poem....it's just beautiful....wow....never stop writing, you have some talent =)....take care ~much love~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

omg.. so awesome! i love it it made me cry.. i was waiting for another poem from u and in my opinion this is one of your best!! keep up the great work n keep ur head up high for us hun! we luvs u! lol yah cyah take care!
*-*Kat*-*

Hey beautiful poem. You have alot of talent. Keep it up.

:*( OMG.... :*( .that brought tears to my eyes. omg omg omg omg!!!!

I like it Nick...its really good! Just like all your writing. I think you should post more...you're writing really is amazing hun....just like you are....
peace
Sammy

Hey, this is good...keep on writing and take care...i know wut you mean..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

beautiful!!!!! you're extremely talented. can't wait to read more. take care,
Ariane
-xXx-

aww this is so sad. I love it though. Defidently a work of art. >3jess

Great poem. I liked the overall thing about it. Amazing job.

Hey i just want to say that u have such great talent for such a young person! i mean that was brilliant! keep it up...i always love ya stuff.