this poem is really good i would say u aint even a beginer haha good job keep writing

GREAT poem!!! I voted a 5!! keep it up!

That was beautifully written! You have a lot of talent! The poem flowed perfectly! Good work and a great read! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

Those were such beautifully expressed bittersweet feelings. I really liked the form, style, flow and rhyming scheme of this poem. Great job!