good job! youre not bad for just beginning. like your sister said, the more you write the better you will get. good luck

It was an ok poem....So I'll give you 3....

A lot of help that was huh?

That was cute...good job

Mmm sweet poem. Makes my heart melt like butter.

thnxs pplz the love one is for my ex-girlfrind

lilbro

Very cute poem :) I gave it a 5
xx

HEY, WOW, I THINK YOUR POEM WAS REALLY DEEP I REALLY LIKED IT! FOR A YOUNG PERSON I THINK THIS IS A GREAT POEM!

HEY, WOW, I THINK YOUR POEM WAS REALLY DEEP I REALLY LIKED IT! FOR A YOUNG PERSON I THINK THIS IS A GREAT POEM!

aaawwww that's so sweet 5/5..keep it up..check out sum of mah poems if u get a chance...vicky