"See your Withering shadow
Crumpled muted shattered
Soul drifting away
Void of all that mattered"

-Excellent. Full of description and a powerful story. Very well done =).

P.S: Thanks for the comment, Elisha. I appreciate it.

WoW.....tht was rele incredible...

thankx for the comments , Elisha

Woah! Great read! Veyr descriptive and powerful. Excellent word usage. Keep it up! xx

Thanks for your comments By the way.
xx

Powerfully written and deeply moving.
This poem is a stark reminder of the cost of silence.
Well done.

Excellent

Excellent poem, well written and vocabulary was wonderful, deep and very sad, heartfelt piece ,it was totally incredible, you did a marvelous job on it keep it up , your friend Tracy dean, 5/5

thanks for sharing, and your comments.