Comments : Forgive Me

  • 17 years ago

    by Fluffy

    "See your Withering shadow
    Crumpled muted shattered
    Soul drifting away
    Void of all that mattered"

    -Excellent. Full of description and a powerful story. Very well done =).

    P.S: Thanks for the comment, Elisha. I appreciate it.

  • 17 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    WoW.....tht was rele incredible...

    thankx for the comments , Elisha

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Woah! Great read! Veyr descriptive and powerful. Excellent word usage. Keep it up! xx

    Thanks for your comments By the way.
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Powerfully written and deeply moving.
    This poem is a stark reminder of the cost of silence.
    Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    Excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, well written and vocabulary was wonderful, deep and very sad, heartfelt piece ,it was totally incredible, you did a marvelous job on it keep it up , your friend Tracy dean, 5/5

    thanks for sharing, and your comments.