ok... i'm actually tryying not to cry becuase i am worriewd about you... hun pplease dont do anything.... please.... i love you!!!! its an amazing opem hun, but please promise me you wont do anything..... please .... xxxxx

its really good, a lot of it actually matches how im feeling, i loved it and im sure although you probably didnt mean it to it will be relative to a lot of people who read it, i thought it was amazing hun,
im always here if u need to talk, just yell,
luv,
ellie
xooox

another brilliant poem, the lines

And the ground beneath is the only thing, that’s always there for sure
People come and go like clouds, raining memories to store

stood out for some reason, keep it up hun, alway remember what a fantastic talent you have.
take care always, lu -x-x-x-

Thanku mwah xxx