Comments : Questions

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was very good but it seemed to me to be like a dear john letter. Not saying it was not good but you seem to state everything more then show me the pain. I hope you understand what I say.Take a look a a poem called your answer. and tell me what you think I will write it in a second ok...

  • 16 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Hey i thinked this poem because it was different and i understood and felt your pain through those questions because most time with love we ask similar questions... anyways i only have one suggestion, I think that maybe you should change the style like skipping a line every fourth one, it's not serious but i just think it will make it easier to read.... 5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Nothing wrong with questions! I think as usual Rachel you have done an exellent job! You already know I'm a fan of your work! Take Care! Brooke