Cool. lol...No, this is a really good poem.

ei i love this poem!!!!!!! i can relate to it!!!!! good luck!!!!

a very well written poem...I love the lines
"You captivate me
With your smile.." it's so sweet...I can relate so well to this poem....and thank you for commenting on my poem, means the world to me......keep strong....

Kalika

I really liked it, and agree with ~Living Dead Girl~ (Kalika), the lines "you captivate me" are really good, they fit so well with the rest. Keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa