i love this poem...

this has a great rythem and it is so true of the world around us in these years that are supposed to be the best of our lives.. destroying a future we no longer have is a trait among us and a folly to us all... keep writing you are one of the best(actually the best on my fav. list :) )

sincerely,
Blackrose A.K.A. the beauty in death

Absolutely brilliant.

My god I actually liked it. It's nice to hear a poem that doesn't follow any certain rhyme scheme, but still works. Not half bad, and your metaphors were pretty good too. Maybe try a different word than "fluffing" in the fifth line. Damn I want to find more to criticize! Oh well, maybe next time.

Awesome,I love it and the metaphors:P 5/5

o my god! i lovvvved it! just the type of social commentary i try sometimes. i like the popculture references and once again the vocab and wording astonish me. congratulations, 5/5!!