Wow! Great job, Aiden!!! I'm so srry about your grandfather, but I'm sure he was honored to have u for a grandson. I can tell this poem came from your heart, it's awesome! Keep it up!

Omg.. so beautiful....so moving. I'm actually...kinda speechless.
Lots of love,
~Krystle~ XXXXX

Hey OMG that is such a great poem! u should read some of mine there not that good but still!
~*~ not loved ~*~
aka
AnJolina Fedrici
( im italian ) lol

Oh that was beautiful. it's not often people leave me speechless. but u did. :) i just loved the symbolism and the way u rhymed it but it didnt' feel corny. and it flowed but it stil felt more like u were actually talking then just writing anothing poem. great job. keep it up! *hugs* ruthie xoxo

ps I lost my grandma last year. lol I was 2 sad 2 every bother writing a poem! how lazy am I!!!! *Grins* catch ya later!