So sad, very good, i like the repetitiveness! stay strong
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thanx lost girl comments always appreciated ur stuffs reli amazin- am mre happy 2 comment on it ne time
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Thats lovely, well done, keep it up, I liked the format

I think this one deserves...5.
I honestly like it..
Keep on writing,,
Okies..Cookies..
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thanx guys its means lots comin frm use cus ur all so amazin, and on my faves alredi btw xxx

5/5, i really liked the rhyming scheme and can totally realte. keep it up
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Technically, there's nothing wrong with the poem. Poetically, it lacks substance.

It's a good poem, but don't count on it being your best. ;)

This was short, sweet, and to the point! I liked it alot!
Love alwayz....
hAiLy
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