How come some stanzas have more lines than others? It's really good though.

Lol

i like this poem tok me a couple of reads to actually grasp but gor and unique

thnx for commentin on my poem it really meant alot to me.

MaTt

Wow that poem is really good..I like very much...Its great!
Love Julie
XOXOX
Take care

Thank you for commenting Juile : )
nice of you indeed.

Hey Mates !
Although i feel like i wanted to give more in this poem,but its all what i've got now,i feel like i have lots of things inside but can't find so much right words to decribe !

so I need real comments from you guys,it would help me.

Peace
Rua Francis

The point of this Poem,is to describe how LOVE means to me,the whole idea of LOVE in my own words ! n how LOVE can be Powerful , Love got powers.

I believe that my idea is so clear ! If you just read it carefully you would understand : )

Peace
Rua Francis

very nice :)

Great job.I enjoyed reading this poem.Jeff

Thanks mate : )

Good poem and i liked the way you did it. I was wondering where you were at myself for a while there mate :).

Well i had computer issues my video card was gone, i couldn't get on the internet except for at work and that is usually only for a few minutes cause i have things to do usually.

Sorry to have worried you Darla. i am back sort of now i will be able to talk more. If you wish to talk through IM or e-mail i will list both of them below.

MSN: lacrossefanforlife@hotmail.com
Aim: Dark C Savior
E-mail: DarkSavior@gmail.com

oh right,

five/five

and thank you for all your comments at a time like this i am so glad to have someone like you around here...it is good to know people still care.

Signed,
Dark Savior

great write.....but I feel like you don't want love. It might be just me, but I feel like you are looking at love as a negative. I don't know, kind of confused. Anyways, I like the words.

Take Care,
Jesse

do you think so ? i mean does it show that its confusing? :S

we all want and need love ! but sometimes we do get scared !

thanks for your advice,i really like it,but as i told you,its scary sometimes,the rejection thingii n stuff like that, sometimes i feel like its better not to tell hw i feel ! it is really confusing !

Always tell how you feel, don't hold back. Love is definitely a scary and confusing thing. But there is someone for each of us and when the time comes for you, you will know it and you won't be scared anymore. This was a great poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

: ) Thank you Angela i will try to work it out sometimes.

lots of Smiles for you ,you are the
Smiling Queen ; )

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

this one is very beautiful!! great job!