I can really relate to this poem, i think it's beautiful and has a good flow! Well done! Check out mine if u want, also about a broken heart. Luv Gem xx

This is a nice poem, girl I feel u, trust me I know how it is when ur guy be talkin bout some other chick, and what not... u could check mines out if u want, cuz they pretty similar to what u wrote, u might relate to it. aight peace.