excellent poem. i really feel your emotion coming off the words. great work. i hope that you aite? plz dont cut, you are better then that i know it. Much Luv Always

Nick

very good poem, keep going, hope things get better for you

"or am i just floating away
away in a draft
in the cold and crimson ocean
the one i created"

wow....very powerful... great poem!
stay strong
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I really like it. Its excellent!
always morgan xox

amazing poem i can totally relate 5/5