Kirsty thanks for your kind words you left me, much appreciated. Sorry I havent replied sooner, I've just got back to civilisation.

I like this a lot, it speaks of despair, and the way the lines are short and there are a lot of them, kind of makes you feel you are on a downward spiral as you read it.

Or I'm just weird, but I liked it anyway.

Good luck ;-) keep it up.

Hey, thanks for all your comments, it was really nice. You're an amazing writer, I loved this poem alot =) keep on writing..

I like your poem.
I hope you get over your broken heart
you will find true love.