It's good David.Yeah!like I said it's good David.

wow... i love it!!! absolutely amazing! can't wait to read more.
Ariane
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I liked it! It was good:) I felt the emotion. -c'ya

hey David,
I enjoyed reading this one a lot.
you really write so wonderfully.
I'm going to put you in my favorites.
take care, Marjan

wow..this was deep well i think so anyways..

a lil off at times but still good.

x)