Hey awesome poem! it defnitly deserves a better grade than it has...but great poem i love it! *5

xX-Katherine-Xx

I like the way you brought each verse to an end with no rhyming, it worked well, keep it up xxx

i love all your poems. im adding you to my favorites. keep it up. 5/5

Ok....whos that random guy telling me that 'our mum' is not a drunk.....do I know you?!

Or do you mean your mum....well im confused but hey im gonna stop commenting on my own work now because I hate it when people do that.

A very deep poem, very well done. I understand how you feel. I wrote a poem on cutting called Single Sharp Blade, you might like it.... 5/5

This is another great one. My fave lines were: "Is so very beautifully numb" because of the irony in it. And "...make me cry crimson once more." The way it's structured is awsome, loving it.