Really good but i have a couple tips. Use belief instead of believe.. because it is better grammar. And the 5th stanza doesn't seem to fit and kinda kinks up the flow. Still a great poem even with some mistakes. Shows you have real talent.

Thanks all for at least reading my poems and in some cases thanks for commenting..

This is and will be my last poem here on Poems-and-Quotes. In a few days from now I will kill myself leaving this pathetic world.. Thanks for those that stood by me.. Cya in another lifetime maybe