hey i like your style in your poem that is i like them they fit me

Great poem...i really liked it...i understand what you mean about fading....obviously as thats my name

I really liked it, keep them coming!

You have your own unique style! Very nice! Your choice of words said everything! Keep posting! Take Care~! Brooke 5/5

This is an awsome poem.. and it's so true.. keep it up!!

"but in the end it was pointless
because all i want to do is end the endless
it will soon be the end and i will be gone
can you hear it now an angels song
and now all i can say is good bye
and to end it all now its time for me to die." in just those coupleof lines you used the word end about five times. it was a good poem an had a good flow but once it got to that repeated word so many times it took away from the poem. there are many words to chose from that mean the same thing like ... discontineu, postpone, conclude, terminate, expire, cease, desist, depart, completion, fullfillment, and so on. those are just aa few from the thesaurus i thought might be helpful. other then that the poem was great! i love the lne "can you hear it now an angel's song" lovely job just take into consideration about the end words..

~Jacklyn

Really sad, but true...I love it!!!
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Wowie... It's beautiful.. Amazing, and very well written sweetheart:) I love it:D Keep it up babe. *hugs*

~Jessica

Thats great! keep it up... Amie