I like it, it's so maturely written and portrays the feeling of a lost friendship beautifully. It made me cry a bit ...

'I wish I could go back and redo every mistake'

I'm not quite sure that's what you mean though :)

Still, an excellent poem, keep it up.

Take care,
Karen
x

Remarkable poem, Heather. Just beautiful. WOW! I'm speechless, once again. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

great poem! 5/5

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

5/5 but i like ur dark poems more but that is just me it was still good

...Oh my god Heather, you completely put into words what i feel right now. Wow, i am almost lost for words.
~Rae

You're such an amazing person and poet...wow...thank you! ...for the comments, your truthfullness and all that...Amazing poem, once again...5/5, keep it up...
Take Care.
Always,
Danielle.

I understand where you're coming from by this poem. Greatly written. Great job.

Hey, good poem 5/5 i hope everything with u and Jesus is ok =( well nice poem hun , rachel

I freely flowed with the pulse and rythm in this one and to say the least, it is AMASING, i love the thought, sentiments and arrangement of the feel. Good work Heather, Pls follow up on these convictions and dont allow despondency steal it. It is creative and meant to bring something eternal back to life, if you follow what i mean!

Excellent write, heather. very well done... keep writing and keep smiling..
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Wow, powerful poem Heather. I never get to talk to you anymore :( Hope to talk to you sometime soon!
Aaron

that was awsome hunz... i loved itt :D
always smile
peaceeeee

oh my god...this is a wonderfully awesome poem. You have an unmistakable gift for writing. I'm blown away with most of the poetry I read from you...I think this one is my favorite so far. 5 for this one, of course!

Eden