actually it wasn't so bad at all..... good job

smiles, hugs and love, angela

aww allen, i can sense somw frustration but its such a cute poem!!

Its kind of funny, though you are not a crappy poet! nice!!!

sammi xxx

Haha!!! omg i loved it!! i think the rhyming and randomess fit this poem very well.. it was so great! i loved ur frustration in it that turned in to humor and then back to fustration and humor.. it was really great! haha keep it up!!!!! :o]