Hey thanks for the comment! I really enjoyed reading this poem! Full of how you feel. Anyway keep it up! :)

Very minor rhyme scheme and flow issues, but solid content and expression, well done.

It's an average poem (don't take offense to that, there's nothing wrong with average), and some lines don't seem to make sense...However, compared to most on this site it's pretty good.

In one part, i think you meant "were" and not "where." anyway, this poem needs some work on it. You see when i read it I got the picture that you were in a hurry to make people understand how you feel, so you didn't actually put all you have into your poem. It needs some more emotion. Otherwise good poem, keep writing,
Satuxxa

it was just O.K there was nothing unique or special about it. Its really just like anyother love poem. If you want to write love poems, they have to be excellent in order for them to be recognized as good becasue so many people write the same
Ilove you
but im so blue,
cuz she loves you too,
and you love her,
and lifes such a blur...
blah blahblahblah!

no effense i mean you can still write about that stuf!! im just saying its difficult to write a REALLY good love poem.

Best of luck to you.

i love it so much feeling,i'm crying wow
o and thanks for reading my poem.thank you, im going to print this and put it on my wall,if it's ok with you?
w/b to me later .thanks

pretty good poem, keep it up. and thanks for the comment

this was a great poem, but i think you should have named it differently. 5/5

Very expressive...

Wow this was fantastic. A lot of emotion and pain; I can feel it. Great job. Thanks for the comment on mine, it meant a lot.

Love much,
Tiff

I think also, that you tried to put so much feeling so fast into this poem, I got the meaning and the flaws are just part of writing your emotions, we don't always flow, or rhythm, we just love and hold on for the bumpy ride of life. Keep writing your emotions, I think you have a lot of talent. Read mine when you have time, and tell me what you think......Good job Love ya Becky