You're freaking me out man!! I hope all is well in your world! Nice write!! 5/5 :)

Well written and hard as it can be at times, try to always stay strong and keep a level head. Life's roads can be hard but we can find beauty at the end of the rainbow--as long as we try. You seem to be a clear minded young lady. love ya, hugs, *Ann*

It's sad and very good.

hey great poem! were talking about this in my english class right now about why people follow the crowd, great job!

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love

I agree with Natalie, you're kinda freakin me out too. lol. But I also agree with Ashley, cuz you always make a good point. Good job. 5/5.
Take Care.
Always,
Danielle.

I could relate to this poem Heather, its a great piece. I found it deep, but not overly open probably due to its length but at the same time and on the same note I think that in itself made this poem more effective :o) Well done darling stay smiling

don't change!!! ur perfect! ur beautiful just like your words