WOW!
This is good! Im truly so sorry about your dad. I don't know what i would do with out my dad. Me and my dad went threw the same thing but something happened REALLY bad and i couldn't see him for 2 years. But now i do. I don't know wat your going threw but im so sorry! HANG IN THERE!

I think this poem lacked form to be honest with you...but what it was missing in form...it definately made up for it in heart. You put all you had into this poem and I can see it in your poem.

I thought it was a very good poem and I think my quote that I made up applies to this "i never made anything new - all i did was put a pen into the human heart"

Very good.

Nothing says it better, u put a lot into that poem and it certainly gets to the reader. keep writting