Comments : Watching My Father Die

  • 19 years ago

    by Jordan

    This was a really good poem. It makes me realize that time with my dad is important, me and him arn't currently on speaking terms. Im so sorry about your dad and I hope that everything turns out for you in the end, and I know that it will because life works mysteries. *Jordan-Paige

  • 19 years ago

    by keira

    OMG.....
    i hope that isnt true. if so im sorry for your loss...... i can relate to what your going through i watched my sister to die.....
    good poem.... alot of feeling