This is REALLY good! You should write more!

lmao hahah LOOOOOOOOOOOSER!! I LOVEEE this poem!! its so cute! and so meaningful..haha YOU inspire me to write me altho mine sucks but thats alrighty...lol buh bye xoxo-kare

Yeah this is the greatest poem hun, you should fix up your grammatical errors for starters. Besides that I hate to be rude but it lacks theme and originality too...

What 'grammatical errors' ? theme? are you blind read the title and orginality. When I wrote this I wasn't thinking; "Hmm..I shouldn't write this because people like Eirisa will think it's not original" It was spur of the momemt.. I'd hate to be rude.

And how can it be the 'greatest poem' if you critisize it RIGHT after complimenting it?